Red05 Posted December 22, 2005 Share Posted December 22, 2005 (edited) Hello folks. You may remember i posted a poem up a while back called "Wasting Away." Well a few of you liked it and gave me good feebback. Thanks. Recently i've had a few more creative sparks, and came up with another. Still with the depressing feel, and this time it doesn't rhyme. I like it though. What do you think? The Endless Circle: [Removed] ________________________________________ Well there it is, or was should that be? Anyway, hope you like it. Edited July 19, 2018 by Red05 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MojoPogo Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 Wow! Intense. I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red05 Posted December 23, 2005 Author Share Posted December 23, 2005 I thank a you Anithero. You've liked both of my poems i do abelieve. My first fan :D Don't wortry folks, i won't be making a regular habit of posting poems (unless you'd like me to :),) i just had some sparks and thought i'd show you what i came up with. Mostly dark and gloomy because you get more of a reaction with that kind of stuff... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MojoPogo Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 Funny that! I never did get why people react to poems about gloom and depression better.....everyone must be secretly depressed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red05 Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 Well. We have more negative words than we do positive, so you can make the language a lot more powerful and emotive when you're writing about darkness and gloom etc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoffmeister Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 That was a good poem mate. But dont tell anybody because im only supposed to like divas, they will think I am becoming a soft touch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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