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Hello TWO, i recently composed the following poem after a few creative sparks whizzed through my head. My mum said it was good, as did my Nana, though she also branded it a little bit depressing. Hehe, anyways, i'm condisering sending it into a magazine or newspaper etc to see if they'd put it in an issue, but first i wondered if you lot could give me some feedback. Please, be nice, i have fragile emotions... ;)









There, what do you think? By the way i apologize if some people take offence by the language used in the 5th verse. It may be altered by a mod.

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