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The Lonely Avenger so far


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i have been in TWOstars for 3 good months now and i think i have done enough things for you TWOstars members to evaluate The Lonely Avenger upon that.

 

what is good about him?

what is bad about him?

what could be done to improve TLA?

 

thanks for every comment i get. i really apreciate it.

 

Han

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Han, you have improved a lot since you came here; and it shows in your writing

 

The one thing i would say you should think about for TLA, is long term. Don't just think about what you're gonna do week by week, have a long term plan for the character - something that you can work towards as a storyline

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