han89 Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 i have been in TWOstars for 3 good months now and i think i have done enough things for you TWOstars members to evaluate The Lonely Avenger upon that. what is good about him? what is bad about him? what could be done to improve TLA? thanks for every comment i get. i really apreciate it. Han Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 To be honest Han I think you have improved amazingly! Your match writing is a bit too.......heavy on the mystical for me, but its all about having different styles. Some people like that. :) keep going how you are buddy. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
han89 Posted November 30, 2005 Author Share Posted November 30, 2005 any other feedback other from the much apreciated feedback from DS? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Telf Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 Han, you have improved a lot since you came here; and it shows in your writing The one thing i would say you should think about for TLA, is long term. Don't just think about what you're gonna do week by week, have a long term plan for the character - something that you can work towards as a storyline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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