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The most sad story i ever read


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This Will Make You Cry it did me anyway...

 

 

 

Jenny was so happy about the house they had found.

 

 

 

For once in her life it was on the right side of town.

 

 

 

She unpacked her things with such great ease.

 

 

 

As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze.

 

 

 

How wonderful it was to have her own room.

 

 

 

School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon.

 

 

 

There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy

 

 

 

It's just the way she wanted her life to be.

 

 

 

On the first day of school, everything went great.

 

 

 

She made new friends and even got a date!

 

 

 

She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be,

 

 

 

Because I just got a date with the star of the team!"

 

 

 

To be known in this school you had to have a clout,

 

 

 

And dating this guy would sure help her out.

 

 

 

There was only one problem stopping her fate.

 

 

 

Her parents had said she was too young to date.

 

 

 

"Well, I just won't tell them the entire truth.

 

 

 

They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?"

 

 

 

Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night.

 

 

 

Her parents frowned but said, "All right."

 

 

 

Excited, she got ready for the big event

 

 

 

But as she rushed around like she had no sense,

 

 

 

She began to feel guilty about all the lies,

 

 

 

But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?

 

 

 

Well the pizza was good, and the party was great,

 

 

But the moonlight ride would have to wait.

 

 

 

For Jeff was half drunk by this time.

 

 

 

She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble,

 

 

 

And heard, call an ambulance!

 

These kids are in trouble!

 

 

 

Voices she heard...a few words at best.

 

 

 

But she knew there were two cars

 

involved in the wreck.

 

 

 

Then wondered to herself if Jeff was all right,

 

 

 

And if the people in the other car was alive.

 

 

 

She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad.

 

 

 

"You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad."

 

 

 

These voices echoed inside her head,

 

 

 

As they gently told her that Jeff was dead.

 

 

 

They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do.

 

 

 

But it looks as if we'll lose you too."

 

 

 

"But the people in the other car!? "Jenny cried.

 

 

 

"We're sorry, Jenny, they also died."

 

 

 

Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done

 

 

 

I only wanted to have just one night of fun."

 

 

 

"Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim,

 

 

 

And wish I could return their families to them."

 

 

 

"Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied,

 

 

 

And that it's my fault so many have died.

 

 

 

Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?"

 

 

 

The nurse just stood there-she never agreed.

 

 

 

But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes.

 

 

 

And a few moments later Jenny died.

 

 

 

A man asked the nurse,

 

"Why didn't you do your best?"

 

 

 

To bid that girl her one last request?"

 

 

 

She looked at the man with eyes so sad.

 

 

 

"Because the people in the other car

 

were her mom and dad."

 

 

 

This story is sad and unpleasant but true,

 

 

 

So young people take heed, it could have been you.

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I hate these emails that people get and feel the need to forward to everyone they know, or everyone who's email address they can find.

 

I find it a waste of time to get upset / annoyed / sad at a piece of fiction. That's my point of view, if it makes me heartless, so be it.

 

Life (in the real world) goes on.

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Guest Thundara

Yeah, I got that email too, I also got one about a little girl's last wishes.

 

Both email's said "Please send to every person in your Address Book".

 

The only thing that made me sad was when I found out someone had written these heart-felt stories with the intent of spreading the virus that comes with them to everyone.

 

It also made me laugh that people fell for it and then sent it to upteen people instantly without bothering to scan.

 

I'd get Norton 2002 if I were you.

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Originally posted by Dreamer

I hate these emails that people get and feel the need to forward to everyone they know, or everyone who's email address they can find.

 

I find it a waste of time to get upset / annoyed / sad at a piece of fiction. That's my point of view, if it makes me heartless, so be it.

 

Life (in the real world) goes on.

 

I agree 100%

 

If you can get upset by that you would be a mess if something bad happened to you in real life. My god, your lifes must be so easy.

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Guest Alliance Mark

Just thought i'g give my input. This is a story and:

 

Quote “ this story is sad and unpleasant but true

 

So that makes it a true story, i wanna pick up on a few points:

 

Twisted Rubble? - how do you get twisted rubble? Why was there rubble? Did they crash into a cliff?

 

Someone had took her out of the rubble? - Do they not know not to move someone until the paramedics have arrived? If this was a paramedic then why did they need to phone the ambulance if they'd already arrived?

 

How did she now there was more than one person in the other car? - She knew their wasn't one person in the other car, if she could see them then she'd know they were her parents!

 

Who was this strange man who asked the nurse the question and what was he doing in her room? - if it was the doctor or priest then surely he'd have known what had happened !

 

This all sounds like a crock of shite to me

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look 'ill tell you this once, i just copyied the story from an email i got so it's not me saying it's true and for gods sake i just thought it was a sad STORY see that STORY nothing more geez do i have to hit you with a sledgehammer to get though to all your thick skulls???
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Guest Dirty Streets

Listen chuck, You are obviously feeling very embarrassed about starting this post. You were stupid enough to think it was a true and sad story ( and yes you did think that ). Just erase this silly thread and go back to your clean and easy life.

 

 

For the benefit of The Alliance Mark: I think she has serious issues!!

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