Guest Tanya Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 This Will Make You Cry it did me anyway... Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life it was on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have a clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well, I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Jeff was half drunk by this time. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Jeff was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Jeff was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!? "Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best?" To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Punjabi Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Didn't make me cry but did upset me a bit. The things that happen in this world... :cry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Latino Reheat Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 And where did you read this story, eh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicole Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 that is a sad story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Perfection Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Lat, it's an e-mail that is going around, it didn't make me cry, but it did make me a bit upset. :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Vulcanized One Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Felt nothing at all. Oh well i guess i am a heartless git. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tanya Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 a bit like a certain mod whose also heartless......wonder who it could be???????? just kidding Tony. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dirty Streets Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 I Got bored and fell asleep half way through. My keyboard is broken due to my sleepy head hitting it. Ill send the bill to Tanya. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jess O Mac Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Yeah..sorry, didnt make me cry, i did laugh though... Do you actually believe that that is true? I also got the e-mail...and it went straight into the trash can! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tanya Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 of corse it's not true thats why i said the most sad "STORY" i've ever read, it's still hits home though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inno Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 I hate these emails that people get and feel the need to forward to everyone they know, or everyone who's email address they can find. I find it a waste of time to get upset / annoyed / sad at a piece of fiction. That's my point of view, if it makes me heartless, so be it. Life (in the real world) goes on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Thundara Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Yeah, I got that email too, I also got one about a little girl's last wishes. Both email's said "Please send to every person in your Address Book". The only thing that made me sad was when I found out someone had written these heart-felt stories with the intent of spreading the virus that comes with them to everyone. It also made me laugh that people fell for it and then sent it to upteen people instantly without bothering to scan. I'd get Norton 2002 if I were you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dirty Streets Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Originally posted by Dreamer I hate these emails that people get and feel the need to forward to everyone they know, or everyone who's email address they can find. I find it a waste of time to get upset / annoyed / sad at a piece of fiction. That's my point of view, if it makes me heartless, so be it. Life (in the real world) goes on. I agree 100% If you can get upset by that you would be a mess if something bad happened to you in real life. My god, your lifes must be so easy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tanya Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 i just thought that it was a sad story, and kinda gives a message to people thats all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Alliance Mark Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Just thought i'g give my input. This is a story and: Quote “ this story is sad and unpleasant but true ” So that makes it a true story, i wanna pick up on a few points: Twisted Rubble? - how do you get twisted rubble? Why was there rubble? Did they crash into a cliff? Someone had took her out of the rubble? - Do they not know not to move someone until the paramedics have arrived? If this was a paramedic then why did they need to phone the ambulance if they'd already arrived? How did she now there was more than one person in the other car? - She knew their wasn't one person in the other car, if she could see them then she'd know they were her parents! Who was this strange man who asked the nurse the question and what was he doing in her room? - if it was the doctor or priest then surely he'd have known what had happened ! This all sounds like a crock of shite to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tanya Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 look 'ill tell you this once, i just copyied the story from an email i got so it's not me saying it's true and for gods sake i just thought it was a sad STORY see that STORY nothing more geez do i have to hit you with a sledgehammer to get though to all your thick skulls??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inno Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Now that would be sad ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tanya Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 just read what i've said and maybe you'll get the point! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inno Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 this became a bit pointless all of a sudden, eh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tanya Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 yeah pretty much, oh well! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dirty Streets Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Listen chuck, You are obviously feeling very embarrassed about starting this post. You were stupid enough to think it was a true and sad story ( and yes you did think that ). Just erase this silly thread and go back to your clean and easy life. For the benefit of The Alliance Mark: I think she has serious issues!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Latino Reheat Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Goddamn I hate those emails I get, especially those crappy chain emails !!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dead Crow Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 got an email the other day sayin "you have won a million pounds-reply to claim your prize" but after you lot said that emails like that are just junk, i erased it. I got another e-mail saying the money had been given away elsewhere but i dont believe them. oh how smart i am. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampiro Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 i got it to. total waste of time reading it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Perfection Posted February 10, 2002 Share Posted February 10, 2002 Anyone else get 10% off Sun Tan Lotion and the sort? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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